I havent really been posting the last couple of days as I have been working on the feedback that I received on Friday so that my work is ready for printing today/tomorrow.
Max also recommended this great book which is originally a German book, but I found a translated verison on amazon, and managed to get that the next dat.
I tried sketching out some layouts that came from his feedback, but I find it difficult to write exactly the content into the layout as obviously you don’t know the point size of your own writing, and you usually over or under compensate.
I used one out the slips to amend the layout on, I tried to figure out a strong vertical grid so that the layout would seem more structured and consistent. I also made notes onto another slip so that I knew exactly what Max was referring too.
I played about with content again, and tried to categories the information into a more logical way, such as screen elements together and print together.
The best book ever. It had examples of good/bad forms as well as smaller details such as colour and typefaces, things that people should consider when designing a form.
Notes I had taken from the book that I felt may help/aid my design, however I did find that with the book, it had so many examples and variations it was slightly over whelming as I wanted to use all the techniques.
I chose Meta for my form, so it being in the book must be a good start.
Clear forms, well set out.